By: Alice Dai

A quick comment about the story:

Suzie is a little girl that loves the color red. She uses it for anything she can. One day Suzie asks her mother for permission to visit her Uncle Jerry. On her way to Uncle Jerry’s house, Suzie encounters unexpected person. This man’s name is Mr. Peter. Mr. Peter is a tree expert, and he always carries an axe with him for safety.

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Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Suzie. She loved red so much that she always tried to eat red foods and wear red. One early morning, she told her mother, “Mommy, I am going to visit Uncle Jerry. I’ve made him a basket full of grapes and cherries that I would like to deliver.”

“Ok little rose, be careful on your way there. Do you want me to come with you? I’m afraid you might get hurt! Here let me pack you some emergency supplies for you to be safe. Also, remember not to talk to strangers! Is that understood?”

“Yes, I understand, now. Bye mommy!”

Suzie walked out the door and into the warm sunlight. She saw pretty flowers and a peacock on her way.

“Oh, hello Mr. Peter! How are the trees lately?”

“Pretty good! The only problem is that there are many bugs this time of year!

“It’s okay, the woodpecker always saves the trees from being eaten by bugs! Well, I’m off to my uncle’s house right over there on top of the small mountain. Bye!”

“Bye-bye!”

As Suzie continued to walk, something moved the bush in front of her, causing a noise. “Hello? Who is there?” Susie asked

“Hello.” said a big orange fox. He had 2 sharp teeth and clever eyes.

“Where are you going?”

“I am going to go to my Uncle Jerry’s house to give him some fresh fruits to eat.” Suzie said.

“Hmm, I shouldn’t tell you too much information because that’s what my mommy said!”

Suzie ran as fast as she could but as she was running her bright red shoes got dirty by the mud up at the mountain.

When she arrived at her uncle’s door, Suzie asked, “Uncle Jerry? It’s me Suzie. Do you mind opening the door?”

“Of course!”

When Suzie stepped inside, she saw two men that looked exactly like Uncle Jerry.

“How is there the two of you?” Asked Suzie

“I’m the real one!”

“No! I’m the real one! Suzie, trust me! I’m the real Uncle Jerry because we baked cookies together on July 10th and this other guy wouldn’t know that!”

When Suzie heard this, she knew he was telling the truth. The real Uncle Jerry and Suzie stripped the imposter of his wig and clothes.

When his costume was off, Suzie shouted, “It’s the Big Fox!”

“Since you’ve discovered my true identity I’m going to have to ea- ” His words paused.

Somebody was knocking on the door then a loud crashing sound erupted. The door was open very wide. It was Mr. Peter! He grabbed his trusty axe and told the fox, “If you are trying to mess with my friends, then you’ve made a big mistake!”

The Big Fox ran out of the house while Mr. Peter chased him with an axe.

The End.