By Kevin Bao

https://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/man-wins-lottery-twice-in-four-years/

I think an article about a man winning the lottery twice in 4 years is great. The thing is that there has to be more information about the man or the lottery he won. I think the article would be a lot better if you had added a lot more words to it. As for me, a person writing about it would have liked a lot more worlds than were given. Because more information equals more words. So if you could next time write a very interesting article with more information that would be great.