July 4, 2024

My Friend Got Deported to Planet Egg

Creative Writing The Journal 2024

My Friend Got Deported to Planet Egg

By: Zixi Ren


Yesterday, my friend Jordan told me he teleported to the planet of Egg.


Yesterday Jordan went to the park and he saw a lollipop lying on the ground, He decided to pick up the lollipop, and then he went dark. When he woke up, he found himself in a new planet with a lot of random talking eggs floating around him. They said to him, ”you are a invader of planet Egg. We have captured you. We shall now take you to our leader, The Strongest Eggling.”


Jordan was not really scared until he saw the strongest Eggling. Then all of his fear just suddenly went away because the Strongest Eggling was a tiny little egg with tiny muscles.


He said to Jordan “BECAUSE YOU ARE AN INTRUDER, I SHALL THROW YOU INTO THE PIT OF EGGLINGS!”


The Egg soldiers came and tied Jordan up and took him to the Pit of Egglings! Now, Jordan was just a little scared because the Egglings were a bit bigger than a quarter of his body size and there were hundreds of them! The Eggling soldiers threw Jordan into the pit and immediately the big Egglings started to attack Jordan but he knew exactly what to do, He took out a Bunsen burner and a frying pan. Jordan used his frying pan and Bunsen burner to scare all of the Egglings into a corner and suddenly the STRONGEST EGGLING stepped on a button and the entire floor of the pit opened up and the Egglings died while Jordan got teleported back onto earth.


In the end, I tried the lollipop, but it didn’t work. So that means the portal is a one-time use!

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